I wrote this with the intention of turning it into a rock song but it skidded into something else, be that poem or a grammatical car crash. you tell me??

Marianas End.


riding high on the crest of a burning tide, mortals and enemies fall, broken to his side.

he seeks vengeance from the depths of the ocean floors. spits on the charred remains of what was once called you and yours. watching, dark eyes, Swirling black as volcanic shores. Mariana takes your head with a swish of his dripping claws.

your bullets your bombs fall feeble at his feet as he chews his way through the rotting human meat. call him the devil or call him a beast he wont stop now until the end of the feast.

Hands bleeding he holds your throat. it’s too late for mercy, you can only but hope. hope for a miracle, pray to the gods destuction's his mission forgeting the odds.

shafts of light crack through the black of the darkest night , unseen by Mariana, her sword stops his killing flight. Who knows how but the lady is here and to stop the misery, his eyes show fear.

broken and wounded they plunge to the depths, only one option a fight to the death. Crimson smoke brakes, hurricanes blow , out flies the hero, her sword , white glow.
The land is broken as the horizon clears. Just as she came the lady disappears.